"Chaminade University will be the college that would help the focus in my career, during the process of becoming a Forensics Science Expert and help my career mentally, physically and financially."
San Francisco State University is the school that will provide a solid learning environment for myself as I pursue a career in journalism through the positive influences of the school as well as it's surroundings, my willingness to learn new things, and equip me with the ability to pursue any interest with the many options the University has available.
UCLA is a college that would help me pursue a career in computer programming, provide new opportunities for my life, and help me learn something new that would help me shape my future.
Devoting two-thirds of my life to ballet, piano, and books have taught me about commitment and perseverance. What began as activities to develop interests have led to opportunities to teach, perform, and work.
Auditioning for Youth Symphony I is a defining story in my life that has helped shaped my character by teaching me discipline, confidence, and perseverance.
In order to pursue the career of nursing there are three things that are needed patience, responcibility, and respect. I have learned these three characteristics through hobbies such as diving and riding dirtbikes.
Life is very complex, and many often don't know where they are going or what they are becoming. Being the catcher in the rye requires being supportive, humble, and selfless to help save those who desperately need the assistance.
Christine Fujioka-pd.1 Kapiolani community college is the school that l want to attend. I strongly believe that KCC will help to better my understanding in the health field career as well as giving me a hands on to what I need to learn. I believe that KCC will proved the learning experience as well as the communication experience because they're all about ohana and friends.
Chaminade University is the university that I feel will help further me towards my goals, impart to me with all the knowledge necessary to be successful, and provide me with memories that will last a lifetime.
Jireh lin pd 1 My father is a man of discipline and practicality, but simultaneously takes the role of a wise mentor, a caring friend to lean on, and most importantly, a man who strives to strengthen genuine relationships with god and family.
To further pursue my education and future careers the University of Hilo is the perfect college. The University has excellent Pharmacy and Marine Biology courses to pursue in.
There have been many people who have made a major influence on me as a person. However, the person who has influenced me the most and made me the person that I am today, is my mother.
UH manoa is the school for me because it allows me to study the career I want to do in an location that is close to home and with a program that will allow me to be successful in nursing.
Thesis: My previous coach, Nathan Aragaki stressed the practices of respect, honesty and persaverence in every situation to build a strong character that has shaped me who i am today.
There have been many important events in my life that have contributeed to who I am, but I believe the biggest is me moving multiple times, It has helped me to realize the importance of my family, friends, and how I should approach life.
The University of Hawaii College of Engineering is the perfect place to further an education, learn more about the career of enginnering, and explore an interest in science.
The University of Hawaii in Hilo will help me to further my persuits in graphic designing, international language developement, and business.
--CHELSEA KIMURA
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The University of Hawaii in Manoa will help to further my education, broaden my visual field of learning, and help to shape me to the person I expect to become.
name: Chelsea Kimura period: 3 The University of Hawaii in Hilo will help me to further my persuits in graphic designing, international language developement, and business.
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Jasmyn Dickie Period.3 High school is a crazy roller coaster ride that you never really get the hang of and then when you think you do it's over, so don't over analyze and enjoy the ride.
When first enetering high school, it is a scary feeling. There are too many things happening all at once. The best thing to is; not to procrastinate, study hard, and have fun!
After high school I think attending the University of Hawaii will be perfect for me. I am looking foward to pursuing my long dream of becoming a civil engineer and this will take a lot of hard work and effort to achieve.
abraham goshay p.2 University of Hawaii manoa engineering program would be the idea college to strengthen my education, develop a career in engineering, and to provide a stable foundation to be successful in life.
Kehaulani Feleciano Prd.2 Tell us what you think about a current scientific or social controversy Duke University
Thesis: 9/11 was signifcant day to America many Americans lost their lives, it is this day that people want to make a harmful but meaningful statement.
There are many things that makes me stand out, but the main ones would be, my perseverance and drive, my positive attitude and personality, and my hard working skills.
Colorado School of Mines is a great school for myself because I aspire to be an engineer, play soccer at the college level for a Division 2, and strengthen my indpenedence from the life I have in Hawaii.
Calvin Soberano Pd. 1 Graphic designing helps me stand out from my peers by drawing on my capabilities to design resourceful, original, and creative works of art.
Honolulu Community College will prepare myself and provide training for entry into the Fire Service Field. It will help me develop new skills and knowledge and being able to help people.
University of Hawaii College of engineering is the ideal college for me because it will not only provide me with the skills I need to become a successful engineer, teach me leadership skills and become an asset to the community; it is conveniently located to where I live.
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In our time, it has become more common for people to be in debt. My family is among those people. Experiencing watching my family financially struggle has motivated me to work hard so i am able to become as successful as God has planned for me to be. Therefore, i've decided to do my best to exceed in my academics so that in the future, i can be financially well off, gain respect of others, and not just get by in life but to live life to the fullest.
Paige Ortega
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"Chaminade University will be the college that would help the focus in my career, during the process of becoming a Forensics Science Expert and help my career mentally, physically and financially."
Natasha Tabakov
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San Francisco State University is the school that will provide a solid learning environment for myself as I pursue a career in journalism through the positive influences of the school as well as it's surroundings, my willingness to learn new things, and equip me with the ability to pursue any interest with the many options the University has available.
Matthew Nonaka
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UCLA is a college that would help me pursue a career in computer programming, provide new opportunities for my life, and help me learn something new that would help me shape my future.
Kim Matsunaga
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Devoting two-thirds of my life to ballet, piano, and books have taught me about commitment and perseverance. What began as activities to develop interests have led to opportunities to teach, perform, and work.
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Auditioning for Youth Symphony I is a defining story in my life that has helped shaped my character by teaching me discipline, confidence, and perseverance.
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Washington State University is the college for me to pursue my education, career in physical therapy, and college experience.
A religious based business is a way to solve poverty by creating consumer products, charity and the business itself.
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In order to pursue the career of nursing there are three things that are needed patience, responcibility, and respect. I have learned these three characteristics through hobbies such as diving and riding dirtbikes.
My experiences have made me unique proving that I have great perseverance, leadership, and a passion for helping others learn and grow as individuals.
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Life is very complex, and many often don't know where they are going or what they are becoming. Being the catcher in the rye requires being supportive, humble, and selfless to help save those who desperately need the assistance.
Christine Fujioka-pd.1
ReplyDeleteKapiolani community college is the school that l want to attend. I strongly believe that KCC will help to better my understanding in the health field career as well as giving me a hands on to what I need to learn. I believe that KCC will proved the learning experience as well as the communication experience because they're all about ohana and friends.
Chaminade University is the university that I feel will help further me towards my goals, impart to me with all the knowledge necessary to be successful, and provide me with memories that will last a lifetime.
ReplyDeleteJireh lin pd 1 My father is a man of discipline and practicality, but simultaneously takes the role of a wise mentor, a caring friend to lean on, and most importantly, a man who strives to strengthen genuine relationships with god and family.
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To further pursue my education and future careers the University of Hilo is the perfect college. The University has excellent Pharmacy and Marine Biology courses to pursue in.
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There have been many people who have made a major influence on me as a person. However, the person who has influenced me the most and made me the person that I am today, is my mother.
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UH of Manoa will further enrich my academics from which i accumulated due to my enthusiasm, diligence, and responsibility.
UH manoa is the school for me because it allows me to study the career I want to do in an location that is close to home and with a program that will allow me to be successful in nursing.
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My previous coach, Nathan Aragaki stressed the practices of respect, honesty and persaverence in every situation to build a strong character that has shaped me who i am today.
There have been many important events in my life that have contributeed to who I am, but I believe the biggest is me moving multiple times, It has helped me to realize the importance of my family, friends, and how I should approach life.
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Education is important because it is knowledge, and knowledge creates careers, money, and new lives.
The University of Hawaii College of Engineering is the perfect place to further an education, learn more about the career of enginnering, and explore an interest in science.
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Soccer has taught me to be a leader and team player, a good student athlete, and a hard-worker.
The University of Hawaii in Hilo will help me to further my persuits in graphic designing, international language developement, and business.
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The University of Hawaii in Manoa will help to further my education, broaden my visual field of learning, and help to shape me to the person I expect to become.
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The University of Hawaii in Hilo will help me to further my persuits in graphic designing, international language developement, and business.
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Risa Seguerre
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MHS is a great school; however, areas that need improvement include bell schedule, student equipment, and meals.
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High school is a crazy roller coaster ride that you never really get the hang of and then when you think you do it's over, so don't over analyze and enjoy the ride.
Christina Otte
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When first enetering high school, it is a scary feeling. There are too many things happening all at once. The best thing to is; not to procrastinate, study hard, and have fun!
Chad Hiyakumoto pd.1
ReplyDeleteAfter high school I think attending the University of Hawaii will be perfect for me. I am looking foward to pursuing my long dream of becoming a civil engineer and this will take a lot of hard work and effort to achieve.
abraham goshay
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University of Hawaii manoa engineering program would be the idea college to strengthen my education, develop a career in engineering, and to provide a stable foundation to be successful in life.
Kehaulani Feleciano
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Tell us what you think about a current scientific or social controversy
Duke University
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9/11 was signifcant day to America many Americans lost their lives, it is this day that people want to make a harmful but meaningful statement.
Maka Ryder
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There are many things that makes me stand out, but the main ones would be, my perseverance and drive, my positive attitude and personality, and my hard working skills.
Rhyen Eugenio
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Colorado School of Mines is a great school for myself because I aspire to be an engineer, play soccer at the college level for a Division 2, and strengthen my indpenedence from the life I have in Hawaii.
Calvin Soberano
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Graphic designing helps me stand out from my peers by drawing on my capabilities to design resourceful, original, and creative works of art.
Holokahiki Toves
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Honolulu Community College will prepare myself and provide training for entry into the Fire Service Field. It will help me develop new skills and knowledge and being able to help people.
Macey Miyasato
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In the past 2 years what i have done to make myself feel good is to just be myself, strive to do my best and give 100%.
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University of Hawaii College of engineering is the ideal college for me because it will not only provide me with the skills I need to become a successful engineer, teach me leadership skills and become an asset to the community; it is conveniently located to where I live.
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My education is the successful key to my future because the things i have learned has taught me valuable lessons.
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ReplyDeleteIn our time, it has become more common for people to be in debt. My family is among those people. Experiencing watching my family financially struggle has motivated me to work hard so i am able to become as successful as God has planned for me to be. Therefore, i've decided to do my best to exceed in my academics so that in the future, i can be financially well off, gain respect of others, and not just get by in life but to live life to the fullest.
ReplyDeleteBeing in a military family led many of the hardships and trials that made me into a better citizen, a better student, and an even greater man.
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I want to attend your university to open up opportunities in my future and explore my interests, while keeping myself grounded with my faith.
ReplyDeleteI would like to attend a university in hawaii so i can attend ROTC and a major in engineering so i can kick start my carrer in the air force
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